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What Is The Tone Of Marigolds By Eugenia Collier

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“Eugenia W. Collier uses elaborate use of diction, interesting and unique syntax, and very imagery and poetic figurative language to create a didactic, optimistic, and abstract tone in her writing of Marigolds” As the story begins, the author uses a very abstract feeling and tone towards the subject of poverty. In the quote, “Surely there must have been lush green lawns and paved streets under leafy shade trees somewhere in town; but memory is an abstract painting—it does not present things as they are, but rather as they feel” (1) it talks about how the memory of poverty is elusive. The second part of the sentence, “but memory is an abstract painting—it does not present things as they are, but rather as they feel” shows what the writer feels …show more content…

It also uses two examples of why you need hope in the face of poverty; this creates the effect that they learn how to have hope. The sentence has very unique terms such as amorphous, grit, labor, miracle, white man’s, vineyard, wander, September dust, offering, and meager. Some of these words like grit, meager, September dust, and labor show how hard they work and how strong they are in a mental sense. There are two phrases that I really thought used very good language although it is not really figurative. One phrase is “to rise before dawn each day and labor in the white man’s vineyard until after dark.” This phrase shows how hard their day is, they have to wake up before morning until after dark, and this clearly shows that the tone of poverty is being courageous and hopeful. Also they have to work in the white man’s vineyard and that creates racial tensions between the two races, so that shows that they have to have the courage to work with them. The other part of the sentence I wanted to point out was “offering one’s sweat in return for some meager share of bread.” This is kind of a metaphor that is …show more content…

In this explanation, “Poverty is the cage in which we all were trapped and our hatred of it was still the vague, undirected restlessness of the zoo-bred flamingo who knows that nature created him to fly free,” (1) the definition of poverty gives a serious attitude. The author began the sentence with “Poverty is the” this style makes you know that the author is going to give some kind of information on poverty. The author chose to make this sentence made up with two metaphors and the effect this makes is that when you are reading the sentence, you first read the first metaphor, “Poverty is the cage in which we all were trapped” you pause and think about it. It would feel like a serious lesson the author is trying to explain. You would picture it in your mind, so we are all in a cage, we can’t get out and we are stuck there for our whole life. I then think about how it would make me feel and how my life would be altered. Then we read on to the second metaphor, “and our hatred of it was still the vague, undirected restlessness of the zoo-bred flamingo”. Okay, now we think about our hatred and how it never stops and we always try to find ways to get out like a zoo-bred flamingo. Now we relate these thoughts to poverty. The author then puts a personification after that, “zoo-bred flamingo who knows that nature created him to fly free, “ the author gives a human characteristic of a conscious mind

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